Example 1:
April 17th 2018
Dear Fatima,
I hope this letter finds all of you in the best of
health and spirits. All of us are also doing fine here. It has been a very long
time since we met or wrote to each other. So I thought of penning down a few lines
to check things with you.
We just got back from our vacation to Malang and had a
great time. We went to Bromo and Kota Batu. Amazing must see places. If you
happen to ever plan a holiday to that side of the world do let me know and I
shall give you tips on sight seeing, culinary, etc.
I want to share something that is disturbing me these
days.Mom has not been keeping good health and I am really worried for her.
Sometimes I see bad dreams about mom and they wake me up in the middle of the
night. I am sure you know what bad dreams I am talking about. Please don’t
share this with anybody and I know I can trust you on this.
Anyways you say what is up with you and how is work? I
can see that it is keeping you really busy, as I haven’t heard from you at all.
Give my love to your mom and dad and loads of love to
you too.
Stay in touch and do write!
Take care
Love,
Aleena
Example 2:
Hello,
I would like to get to know someone from your country
and a friend has told me that you would like to practise your English. Perhaps
we could email each other. Could you tell me a bit about yourself and your
family? Could you suggest how we might meet sometime in the future?
Thanks...
Example 3:
Hello Alexa,
I'm glad you're interested in my country. As your
friend said, I'd like us to email each other to help me improve your
English.
Let me start by telling you a bit about myself and my
family. My name's Ivo and I live in Kutna Hora, which is about 45 minutes from
Prague by car. I used to work for a medical company but now I'm learning to
be a salesperson. In the future I want a job where I can travel for my
work. I've already been to a few places in Europe but I've never been to
an English-speaking country.
I live at home with my parents, which is convenient,
as I don't have to do much housework and my meals are cooked for me. My younger
brother is studying at university. Although he is four years younger
than me, we get on quite well. We both enjoy snowboarding and music.
What about you? Have you ever been to the Czech
Republic? It would be great if you could come over one
Anyway, I must go and get on with my work! Looking
forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Ivo
Module 1
Activty 1 Task 2
1.
What personal relation do each sender
of the letter to the addressees? Provide evidence from the letters
Answer:
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Example 1 :
Personal relation sender of the letter to the addresses
is ”close friend”
Evidence from the letter are
1.
I want to share something that is
disturbing me these days. Mom has not been keeping good health and I am really
worried for her. Sometimes I see bad dreams about mom and they wake me up in
the middle of the night. I am sure you know what bad dreams I am talking about.
Please don’t share this with anybody and I know I can trust you on this.
(Paragraph 3)
2.
Give my love to your mom and dad and
loads of love to you too. (Paragraph 5)
ü
Example 2:
Personal
relation sender of the letter to the addresses is “new friend”
Evidence from the letter are
I would like to
get to know someone from your country and a friend has told me that you would
like to practise your English. Perhaps we could email each other. Could you
tell me a bit about yourself and your family? Could you suggest how we might
meet sometime in the future? (Paragraph 1)
ü
Example 3 :
Personal relation sender of the letter to the addresses
is “new friend”
Evidence from the letter are
Let me start by telling you a bit about
myself and my family. My name's Ivo and I live in KutnaHora, which is about 45
minutes from Prague by car. (Paragraph 2)
What about you? Have you ever been to the Czech Republic?
It would be great if you could come over one (Paragraph 4)
2.
What is the tone of each letter?
Provide evidences from the letters.
ü Example 1
The tone are
a. be courteous
I hope this letter finds all of you in
the best of health and spirits. All of us are also doing fine here (Paragraph
1)
b. Show how the feeling
§
We just got back from our vacation to
Malang and had a great time (Paragraph 2)
§
I want to share something that is
disturbing me these days. Mom has not been keeping good health and I am really worried
for her (Paragraph 2)
ü Example 2
The tone are
a. Serious
I would you like to get to know someone
from your country and a friend has told me that you would like to practice your
English. Perhaps we could email each other
(First-second sentences)
ü Example 3
The tone are
a. Comic
I live at home with my parents, which
is convenient, as I don’t have to do much housework and my meals are cooked for
me. My younger brother is studying at university. Although he is four years
younger than me, we get on quite well. We both enjoy snowboarding and music.
(Paragraph 3)
task 3
THE ANALYSIS OF
THE LETTER STRUCTURE BY THE SENDERS AND RECEIVERS BY REFERRING TO THE PREVIOUS
LETTER IN TASK 1
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L1
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L2
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L3
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Date
of writing
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April 17th 2018
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Sender
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Aleena
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Ivo
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Greetings
form
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Dear
Fatima,
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Hello,
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Hello
Alexa,
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Main
content
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Telling the receiver that she worried about
her mothers’ health.
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Telling that the receiver is the person who would like
to practice his/her English. The sender hope they could email each other.
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Telling that the receiver is the person who
would like to improve her English. The sender would like if they can email
each other.
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Personal
news
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Telling
about the sender condition and vacation.
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Introduced
the sender himself and telling about his family.
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Complementary
close/Sign off
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Stay in touch and do write!
Take care
Love,
Aleena
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Thanks...
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Looking forward to hearing from
you soon.
Best wishes,
Ivo
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Receiver
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Fatima
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Alexa
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task4
THE SIMILARITIES AND
DIFFERENCES OF THE LETTERS
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Letter 1
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Letter 2
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Letter 3
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Similarities
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Social
Function
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Text function is to exchange news
about the sender’s last vocation and her mother’s condition
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Text
function is to make a relationship with a new friend
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Text
function is to exchange information to a new friend.
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Text
Structures
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· Date
· Salutation and name
· Introduction
· Body
· Closing (to indicate the letter is going to end; Give my love to your mom and dad and loads of love to you too)
· Complimentary close (short expression; love)
· Signature (name of the writer; Aleena)
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· Salutation
· Introduction
· Body
· Complimentary close (short expression; thanks)
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· Salutation and name
· Introduction
· Body
· Closing (to indicate the letter is going to end; anyway I must go and get on with my work!)
· Complimentary close (short expression; best wishes)
· Signature (name of the writer; Ivo)
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Lexico-gram matical
Feature
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The text using:
· Simple present tense
· Simple past tense to tell the past experience
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The
text use simple present tense
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The text usesimple
present tense
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Differences
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Social
Function
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To
exchange information to someone already known
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To inform that the sender wants
to make a friend with someone new.
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To
reply the letter from a new friend.
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Text
Structures
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There
is a date
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There is no date,
name of addressee, closure, name of sender nor signature
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There
is no date
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TASK 5 (M1 LA1 PART 1)
NAMA :
NOVIASARI RITONGA, S.Pd
NO. PESERTA :
19070815710065
SEKOLAH ASAL : SMP
NEGERI 3 PURBATUA
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task 6 |
Email letter
sequence is F-B-D-E-A-C
F.
Lissy wrote:
Bryan,
Since I know that you're teaching speaking, may I know what
kind of test you used? and how did you test them? is it one to one test like
a common international speaking test?
Have you ever tried using
portfolio assessment in speaking class? Looking forward to hearing from you
soon.
Thank you and have a great
day ahead!!:)
Wassalam
Lissy
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B
From: Bryan@gmail.com
CC:
michael@gmail.com To: Lissy @gmail.com
Dear Lissy:
Coincidentally,
my Speaking III curriculum is a project that ends in a recorded assessment
(which becomes a time capsule) and a portfolio of the work done in the
creation of it over the two preceding months. It's hard to share all of the
pieces with you digitally, as the videos are around 100MB apiece, and the
examples of student work aren't even digitized. That said, if you really want
to know more, maybe we can schedule a Skype chat, and I can just show you? Or
better yet, perhaps I can just bring some stuff to Jakarta some time over the
next month, and you and I can sit and chat about the project while Akang
Michael smokes cigarettes. =)
takzim,
Bryan
CC: Hey Michael, any idea when you'll be
around through January? I may
swing by. Also, do recall that I inquired
about catching up via phone last week, friend. =)
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D
Lissy wrote:
Dear Bryan,
Wow...yes..yes..I'd love to
know more how you did the project=) and i think it would be better if you
swing by to Jakarta next month then we have that chat...may I know when will
it be exactly?
The main reason why I
prefer to have the chat directly is..I don't know how to use a Skype chat=D
Wassalam
Lissy
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E.
From:
Bryan@gmail.com
Bryan wrote:
Dear Sister
bear (and papa bear, CC'd):
At long last, I am planning to swing through Jakarta next
month! While my plans are not yet
solid, it seems likely I'll be there for the second week of January. During that time, I'd like you to consider
the possibility of us:
a)
discussing my "World
Tomorrow" Project, as mentioned below. I will bring examples on Nina's
behalf, and would be happy to work with Michael to get the project into a
readily-sharable form for future ETAs and ELFs. It is a project I am quite
proud of, which targets a number of skills in speaking, writing, and critical
thinking, and which has proven successful with over 200 Indonesian students
now!
b)
baking cookies! Last year,
Jackie, Michael and I did so, and I still remember the experience fondly. In
fact, I've just added Jackie to the CC list too, on the off-chance she might
want to join us for some cookie-baking… wishing you a wonderful year's end,
Bryan
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A
To:
Bryan@gmail.com From: Lissy@gmail.com Great!!
but
FYI, I'm not good at baking cookies actually=/ So, I'll probably rely on you
guys..=D
Lissy
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C
From: Jackie@gmail.com
To: Bryan@gmail.com CC: Lissy
Cookies! I'm
down :)
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